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  1. Lilly (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sat 02 Nov 2024 04:06AM UTC

    OMG OMG OMG. BABY YJ is sooo cute. And SHJ as a baby is something i didnt expect to need.

    "His mother was smiling at him. It was a foggy memory, he remembered nothing but the warmth of her bosom and the happiness in her face as she looked down at him."
    A core memory i SEE. Will that be his only happy one from his parents?

    "The young boy only wanted that expression from his mother. And he does receive... a tenth of that every now and then"** EMOTIONAL NEGLECT is also abuse.
    "He really couldn't stop himself as he softly shouted, "Fairy!" ""
    Idk why but i was happy when reading this line. Finally he acts his age.

    "He looked just like a fairy. Fairies were kind."
    Just how much did he liked fairies to go against his mother rules? Adorable.

    "H-have y-y-you seen my mam-mother- my mother?" Han Yoojin said, correcting the way he refered to his mama. His father had taught him to not use baby words when talking to other people".
    First mention of the dad. Seems like the mom is around more? Even though not completely. Just theories.

    Golden eyes squinted, a small interested smile playing on his lips as they looked at the boy and the book he was holding".
    No matter which universe these two are, SHJ ALWAYS find HYJ interesting. It's a principle. ^v^

    "Unable to bear their own weight, a few tears slid down Yoojin's face as he quietly sniffled".
    Are those eyes way more intimidating or is yoojin just shy? I wonder if it's her mothers influence making him be terrified of offending people.

    "Han Yoojin looked up just as the teen boy peeked around to look for him".
    He's a little mouse, scared and hidden behind the books.

    "Still even one sentence sounded interesting to him. The prospect of hearing a tiny baby try to read a line out of the 'Modern history of Seseong'..."
    Should have expected that Yoojin didnt know the tittle of the books he's been holding the entire time. Dos his mother verify what goes into his pile of reading? Or did he picked it cause of the cover?

    "He wanted to tell his mother first...
    She is BUSY. not one moment of rest to praise her only son. ARGHHH

    "But the older boy looked like a fairy"
    FAIRY SUPREMACY. LETS GOOOO :D

    "It was the first time in his life that the prince did not feel satisfaction by bringing another to tears with just his eyes."
    Is it guilt i'm feeling here? O.O . Very in character for SHJ.

    "...No...you read it so beautifully...it almost made me believe it."
    I smell...emotional issues (help, i can't insert gifs.)

    I think i quote all My fav lines. Hope this helps with artist block. (Eng is not my first language. But i love the theme of those two building their relationship).

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    1. alleeval on Chapter 1 Sat 02 Nov 2024 05:08AM UTC

      I kept blushing reading your comment 🤭

      You know its one thing to read someone liked what they read and then there is you.

      🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷

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      1. Lilly (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Nov 2024 04:11AM UTC

        just wanted to show my love for the fic. : 3

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