Comment on They call it Dark Magic

1. Malec_trash (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 28 Nov 2016 07:30AM UTC

   "I'm afraid that ship has sailed and you missed your chance to get on it" is the best line I have ever read in my life. The buildup is absolute perfection and you convey the emotions so well!

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2. 1. MapleBreeze (Guest) on Chapter 1 Thu 15 Dec 2016 04:25AM UTC

      I agree that is such a great moment.

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