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  1. SeleneMoon on Chapter 5 Wed 20 Nov 2024 06:00AM UTC

    Great artwork! Think you also edited this paragraph since my last reread. Intriguing new vibes of Tim distantly knowing he’d been claimed by his dad and that he wanted to be.

    “He should question it, find the answers, and search for an explanation, but he just… didn’t. There was no need to. He distantly knew what was happening, he was claimed by his dad, and oh, how it felt right like what he always wanted. Being where he should be, in the arms of his clan, the place he belonged.”

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    1. Covenyt2950 on Chapter 5 Wed 20 Nov 2024 01:00PM UTC

      Thanks! The praise is all for the amazing artist😊

      Also yes! You noticed it! I'm so happy you did. I wanted to make it more clear how Tim has been wanting this, his pov and his scene with Bruce in the third chapter already show some of that and his insecurities about it, but I thought it lacked in the claiming scene.

      Can't wait to write the talk between him and Bruce! And have fun with the reread!

      Last Edited Wed 20 Nov 2024 01:01PM UTC

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