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  1. kayniiine on Chapter 1 Sun 01 Dec 2024 01:06AM UTC

    GOD DAMNIT I CLICKED THE WRONG ONE. so here it is on the right one lmao

    HELLO COMRADE.

    so bear with me as my progress through this will be slow going as i try not to read when i write cause my memory works in stupid ways BUT I was restless last night and started reading ch1.

    FIRST OFF: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    your exposition and attention to detail/ability to communicate visuals??? I'm frothing at the mouth with all of the pictures you're able to paint for me. it is truly remarkable, seriously.

    I love jen and rio's friendship; it gives me and my bestie vibes and im here for it.

    also lastly, the whole gala was AMAZINGLY WELL WRITTEN?? like baby Rio is just vibing while also feeling so out of place but not letting it show, and that WORKS for Agatha who is so used to people trying to force their way into her good graces and Rio just straight up is like I'm here for the champagne and the paycheck but life is never that easy, girl.

    ANYWAY I will keep chugging at this when I have the time but I wanted to leave a comment to let you know how DEEPLY I am loving this

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    1. visadero on Chapter 1 Sun 01 Dec 2024 01:21AM UTC

      Ah thank you!!! Please do take your time and I appreciate you checking it out!

      “ Rio just straight up is like I'm here for the champagne and the paycheck but life is never that easy, girl.”

      YES you are 100% correct

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