This chapter was so much fun for me, jokes scenes are really cool, I laughed at them :D
Also, checked pokedex, now I wanna an Owten, Ah It's pity Serena didn't get one, but I will wait for another pokemon for her! ~
By the way, you made Natalie a great character! Especially I like her STORY with the pokebols, missing the aim :D (you write, it was your real experience, so great idea to add it to the story. It makes Natalie such a real life character)
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