Comment on Ash and Serena's Atomic Odyssey

  1. This chapter was so much fun for me, jokes scenes are really cool, I laughed at them :D

    Also, checked pokedex, now I wanna an Owten, Ah
    It's pity Serena didn't get one, but I will wait for another pokemon for her! ~

    By the way, you made Natalie a great character! Especially I like her STORY with the pokebols, missing the aim :D
    (you write, it was your real experience, so great idea to add it to the story. It makes Natalie such a real life character)

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    1. Well, Serena just caught a Selkid, so she wasn't going to caught another Pokemon immediatedly after. But she will get another pretty soon ;)

      Hehe, I'm glad you liked that tidbit of Natalie.

      Thanks a lot for your comment :)

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