Thank you so much for your comment! I adore Takao, and I'm glad that my love for her came through loud and clear.
I've been thinking about the school uniform since the earlier comment, and the more I think about it the more I think you and xSci_zeR are right. I plan on making a slight revision to that portion of the story, so that the uniform Takao wears for Scott is not the same one as she wore for the previous Commander.
Thank you for your feedback on this story: I really appreciate it.
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DrPuffinPhD on Chapter 13 Mon 09 Dec 2024 10:21PM UTC
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