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  1. Benny_IsA_Dog on Chapter 4 Sun 22 Dec 2024 02:57PM UTC

    Another great chapter! Poor Ratthi and everyone around him! I love the slow burn up to the main conflict around MB.

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    1. Cacaphonia on Chapter 4 Mon 23 Dec 2024 01:00PM UTC

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      Thank you so much! Your comments keep me hyped about writing.
      I just hope that the burn isn't too slow or people might lose interest.
      I'm pushing myself to get this story out of my head before the end of the holidays while I still have spare time :)

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      1. Benny_IsA_Dog on Chapter 4 Mon 23 Dec 2024 11:28PM UTC

        I think the teaser summary at the beginning helps keep the tension up for the slow burn. And now that we know how the stuff affected Ratthi, we can see how things are going wrong with MB. I think it's great!

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        1. Cacaphonia on Chapter 4 Tue 24 Dec 2024 08:39AM UTC

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          TY for that pep talk, you're the real MVP ^^

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          1. Benny_IsA_Dog on Chapter 4 Sat 28 Dec 2024 05:11AM UTC

            You're welcome!

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