No, but you did a great job with the set-up and melancholy. The fact that her solution helped, but was awkward and painful and she almost regretted trying at all felt very real.
That final interaction, with Naruto asking how to put the earrings on? I felt SUCH relief. Great delivery.
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TabethaRasa Wed 01 Jan 2025 12:18AM UTC
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