The whumperflies started with „Father and favorite son watched Jay walk out the door“ and stayed with me until „ He stood there for awhile, Mom would be ashamed of him, then afraid his dad would notice and start in on him again, his mom would be ashamed of him, he headed for O'Brien's Liquor, suddenly feeling too sober and much more alive than he wanted to be.“
That’s a new level of whumperflies, my friend! A new level of emotional agony. Every word of this was pure pain and you had me bawling the whole time. Anybody would have been suicidal after the shit that went down. Poor Jay. 😱😭😭😭😭 Holy shit.
I will bookmark and cherish this story till the end of time. Sometimes I will come back to it, re-read it and be destroyed all over again—just for fun.
Thanks for the awesome comment! And I definitely know this is your shit! I thought of you often while writing it! Then thought of you again while working on Will’s story. My goal is to crush your heart. I hope I can do it.
MrsReadalot had suggested I move Pat’s introspection and it saved the whole damn thing. She’s a life saver!
I have to tell you, I absolutely love being mean to Jay emotionally!
Hopefully Jay’s birthday is even more crushing. But that one will be awhile. I want to do Will’s next and hopefully finish Tap. We’ll see what in the hell Barbara wants to do.
But thank you so so so much. I’m so glad I made you cry! 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈 you are an inspiration!
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