The opening scene is so visceral! From a writing perspective, I love how you developed the hierarchies of tension between Hermione and Dirk (from a reader perspective: my poor Hermione!). And I’m so intrigued by the golden trio dynamics in the flashback scene (love reluctant healer Ron!! Extremely hot of him lol).
AHHH thank you ebee! ❤️ I was sooo excited to see your name in the comments because 1) it's you and 2) I'm a big fan of everything you've written :D hierarchies of tension is such a good way to put it! I really wanted to explore tensions between different identities in this first scene, Muggle-born/pureblood and male/female and the intersection of those. The golden trio dynamics have always been so fascinating to me, and healer Ron is a wild card I never thought I'd write, but I've enjoyed what it adds to their dynamic so much actually :)) thanks again for this lovely comment!
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