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  1. Even when he did, he would barely make it down to the library for a brief conversation before declaring he was tired and dragging himself back to his bed.

    Do we think this has something to do with proximity? I really do wonder why fake!varric, if it was controlled by Solas or even if it was all in Rooks head, never really left the infirmary or the library. Mechanically, I assume they didn't want to animate him in other rooms but I really feel like it would've sold everything better.

    . She could see arms stretching out from between the fleshy vines as if begging to be pulled out. Boils pulsed as if they had a heartbeat, the sound of it thrumming in her ears like a drumbeat.

    IT WAS SO GROSSSSSSSSSS. I hated it. The heartbeat sound from the boils just absolutely sent me scrambling for my volume.

    “I understand what they do now. I won’t be tempted again! I swear,” the Mayor begged once more

    Solas stepped closer, his movements measured as if approaching something fragile but volatile. “Exhaustion lies on you heavy. Dare I guess that the waking world is in trouble?”
    hehehehe... snarky snark, poking the tired BB. Careful Solas, I suspect she bites.😏

    “You can ask me anything else other than the horrors of the world.” She said. Her shoulders sagged, as if they couldn’t hold the weight of today anymore, her hands dropping in a bit of a dramatic fashion. She hated how she felt as if he could see through the cracks she fought to hold together.

    Yesss! Love her forcing him to engage on a personal level. I wish we'd gotten more options for Rook to resist his "help" even if it meant some additional consequences.

    “And why is that, Rook?” he asked, his voice dropping to a near whisper, as he leaned closer, now barely inches away from her. “Is it the intimacy of being known that frightens you?”

    OPE😳

    She could walk away—let him watch her leave—and keep her dignity intact.

    “You could, surely.” His words followed her. “But you came here because you needed to. Even if you do not wish to admit it.”

    *whispers*I don't think she realized she didn't say anything out loud but he's responding as if she did 'cause he's in her heaaaaaaaaaadddddddddd

    “But I do, Fenrel. I see you more clearly than you wish to be seen.” He whispered to the void as she faded away, the waking world taking her back.

    and this delightful bastard is going to make use oof it, I'm 1000% sure.

    Lovely chapter! The changes to the canon dialogue were wonderful and I'm excited to see how their relationship is going to develop!

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    1. aaahhh thank you again! Speaking of visitors in her head.. Chapter 6 will say a lot (and it is also dropping today, so yay!)

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