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  1. Reading through this again and remembered what I wanted to say yesterday.

    “His ragged sobs turned into practical pants, and the tears running down his cheeks were replaced by sweat.”

    I absolutely love the transition from Sunday crying to his sickness getting worse. It’s subtle and flows incredibly well.

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    1. thank you !!! :D i was so unsure about that transition honestly so im glad it worked out in the end !!!!

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