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  1. NoraAnne (Guest) on Chapter 3 Mon 03 Feb 2025 03:45AM UTC

    This whole piece makes my heart happy. The banter between Hannibal, B.A., and Face is so on point. I could absolutely hear them saying each word. 😍🤩

    I love that you brought Tom Angel in to play in this one. We knew he was slimy, but now we see even more why the Team was so disgusted by him when he appeared in Recipe for Heavy Bread.

    Well done! ❤️

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    1. OnYourLeftWritingClub on Chapter 3 Tue 04 Feb 2025 02:01AM UTC

      Oh, YAY!!! I'm so happy this piece made your heart happy! I loved writing the Team's banter in this one. Getting to indulge in some humor after all the emotional angst and hurt in the previous chapters felt so good. And I'm glad you enjoyed Tom Angel's appearance. I hadn't originally planned on including him in this one, but then it just fell into place. Writing the Team through his eyes was such fun -- even though Tom didn't enjoy it at all, LOL.

      Thank you again for all of your lovely reviews!! Each one made me so happy. Thank you!

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