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  1. Ahaha welcome! You're in for the long haul if you think the early chapters have good dialogue. I think it gets better once I get really to grip with everyone. Chapter one was written the day of season 1 finale so I was emotional and chaotic. By chapter 5 I'm more chill, and beyond chapter 10-12 I've been dissecting the characters on Tumblr, discord, writing other fics, etc. You'll see my voice mature in real time. Hope you enjoy it!

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