Comment on Death of a star(is just the rebirth of another)

  1. Perseusishot on Chapter 3 Fri 14 Feb 2025 07:17AM UTC

    I like your take on Melania, I will definitely make her a strong side character. There won't be any power imbalance in their marriage as she will confront Arcturus.

    But i don't think Adhara will get close to Melania soon, bc she hates the family for abandoning her. She will have a civil conversation but i think there is a long way to go before Adhara gets close to any Black except for Sirius and Regulus bc they were small when all that happened and they are her siblings.

    But, she will threaten both of them too, she will force their views to change as they both view the world very differently

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    1. Aejill on Chapter 3 Fri 14 Feb 2025 08:43AM UTC

      This is a nice solution/direction. It has been fun so far and I am certainly looking forward to seeing more of your writing.

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