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  1. Saarovar on Chapter 5 Mon 03 Mar 2025 06:03AM UTC

    ...Simeon. Simeon please why are you still trying to get through the door even though you can feel "something" trying to get in your head. His desire to know what's going on is stronger than his self-preservation I guess. Either that or he's REALLY confident that "something" won't get through. XD

    I love the descriptions of the magic and how it affects him and the comparisons between Lyblac's magic and what I assume is him trying to work with Vide's magic (or Darquest's or similar), it's REALLY interesting and I could feel everything that was described.

    Also the bit that's crossed out... I can FEEL the emotion there. His mental state really isn't as clear or composed as he'd like it to be, is it...

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    1. HazelGatoya on Chapter 5 Tue 04 Mar 2025 10:11PM UTC

      His curiosity is very much stronger than his sense of preservation.

      I had a lot of fun with the magic descriptions. The differences between Galdera and Vide are fascinating to me and I can explore those with Simeon. :D

      Simeon is lying through his teeth whenever he says he's fine :3

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