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  1. What a chapter!!! So many good moments!! Stolitz public confession, the hilarious pregnancy reveal where everyone already knew lmao, Millie talking about what happened during Ghostf*ckers, protective Loona and M&M, Sally Mae!!, Fizz being the best, Stolas trying his hardest to help Blitz and actually succeeding, the birthday reveal, Fizz's dinner plans with Barbie!!! Everything was soooooo good and tender and delightfully angsty (I especially loved Blitz crying while eating the cupcake; Studio Ghibli made me a monster for the crying while eating/being comforted trope as far back as Spirited Away lol) It's only been a few hours and I've already read this chapter like five times it's that good!!! And that text message at the end!!! Everyone is coming home!!! It's time for B to have the big family that he always wanted!!

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    1. These kinds of comments always make my day! I've genuinely had so much fun writing this chapter, and I'm so happy to hear you liked it so much!!! I 100% had Spirited Away in mind with the cupcake scene (Studio Ghibli got me with that trope as well lol)! I'm also super excited to finally be at a point of incorporating Octavia into the family, and it's going to make for a very interesting dynamic between her and Blitzø.

      There are a LOT of sweet moments planned for chapter 4, but given how chapter 2 and 3 were originally supposed to be 1 chapter, this very well might end up being a 5 chapter fic.

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