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1. Leapingbadger on Chapter 1 Fri 28 Mar 2025 12:58AM UTC

   

   I cannot express how much I enjoyed this. You write them so beautifully! Your writing is lyrical and descriptive and perfect!

   I adore how Cody slowly slips into owning his feelings, especially he reluctantly says Obi Wan’s name.

   Thank you so much for sharing this! 🫶

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2. 1. panravenc on Chapter 1 Fri 28 Mar 2025 11:35PM UTC

      

      I'm glad you liked it!! It made me so happy to read this!! and that you think highly of my writing!! english is not my native language so it means a lot ;; and yes!! i wanted to show it as much as i could, how obi-wan at first is "the general" and eventually he's "obi-wan"/"his jedi"! he falls slowly but surely, our cody alsjdfksd though obi-wan behind the scenes is pining just as much lololol. thank you for reading and commenting! (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

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