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  1. RubenWaters on Chapter 4 Tue 01 Apr 2025 04:24PM UTC

    Even if the update is slow I think your doing an amazing job with what you have written down here already. Maybe a time jump next chapter Vi, Vander, Mylo, Claggor all were cut off by Jinx when she goes to live with Silco and Sevika. And Silco actually ya know let's her the help that she needs because he is actually resourcefull also a thought Jinx being a genius and magic being a thing and since she does name her guns and bombs I feel like she should.be able to talk to technology I don't know just a random thought I had

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