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  1. Hey, thanks so much for your feedback! I'm gonna level with you, I completely did not intend to gender the reader, I'm just bad at keeping things gender-neutral. If I get a chance I'll 100% edit the gendered references I make, but most of the time when I'm writing it's like 3AM and I'm not super coherent. You asked a lot of great questions, most of which I don't have the answer to myself, but I'm working on the next chapter slowly but surely ;-; . There are a few questions I can answer that have already been covered in the fic, though! (read at your own risk I did keep things quite vague on purpose to avoid having it all spelled out) So Phil's big secret was that he'd been siphoning the reader's power via locking it into the jewelry, and hiding the reader's true identity as the god of life. It's heavily implied that Dream witnessed the ritual to siphon the reader's power in exchange for Dream becoming a god. Apollo's italics was mostly an accident, he is the same chipper dog as ever.

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