triton knows cuz he saw it, it was in the first chapter I think. And yes I’m still fine with constructive criticism and this chapter was rushed so I appreciate constructive criticism. Ericthonius is probably gonna be Athena and Pallas’ adopted child or something im still thinking haha.
You said ‘after Pallas calmed Athena down…’ That shouldn’t be reduced to a single sentence. You can easily write that into an entire scene that helps us build more of an emotional connection to the characters
Your research is fantastic btw lol going in rabbitholes is sm fun haha
im very fast with replying because I’m chronically online. With this new constructive criticism I’m gonna make more angst. These characters shall suffer then get healed only to suffer again. I barely know anything about Greek mythology (havent read the books but used online sources and I cannot find some bookstore that sells them) but thank you for the compliment on my research !!
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