I tried to force myself not to have a comment for every single line this time, but man was it hard. Your writing is absolutely stunning and captivating. The dialogue, the descriptions, the introspection, ugh it's all so good!
[His shadow stretched across the room like a question no one had asked yet.] Love this line, my favorite of this chapter.
[you carry everything until you break, and then you just…leave.”] Echoes of the movie events 👀
[“You always promise stuff like that. And I always believe you. So just…please, mean it this time.”] This...actually shattered my heart, wow, thanks /lh
The tension throughout this whole chapter was so palpable. I legit had tears in my eyes during the breakfast scene. All of the reconciliation scenes were so good! And the way you write the characters' personalities is so faithful to the show!
I am enjoying this story immensely and I'm so excited for more!
You can leave as long as comments as you want! Lol. They warm my heart so much and I always read the whole thing. Thank you so much for the sweet comment. I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for the prayers! I definitely need them. 😅❤️❤️❤️
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