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1. Nxull_02 on Chapter 4 Tue 29 Apr 2025 07:57AM UTC

   

   I found myself wholly enraptured by this piece—each word pulling me deeper into the shadows of your tale. It stirred in me a remembrance of the show from which it draws its blood, and with it, a bitter distaste. How carelessly they molded Landon, a figure once brimming with promise, reduced to a hollow echo of what might have been. His phoenix nature—such a symbol of fire and rebirth—was scarcely touched upon, flickering only briefly before being cast aside, as if the flames of his potential were too bright for them to bear.

   Yet here, in your hands, the story finds breath again. I am taken with your rendering of these characters—so vivid, so charged with soul. You have breathed into them the life the original dared not sustain, and for that, I am eager—hungry, even—to see where you will guide them next.

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2. 1. Demonwerewolf21 on Chapter 4 Tue 29 Apr 2025 11:39PM UTC

      

      Thank you, I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it moves forward

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