That Alice still isn’t able to be calm, tears in that world making her extremely on edge feels in character and it shows in how she is with authority figures.
Take your time, from experience you can’t rush these things.
Glad you've enjoyed Alice's story. Has been fun to write about her, but also the flip side of her dealing with this new Earth and space aliens that are anthropomorphic animals.
However, Knuckles being literal minded has been enjoyable to write.
Thank you. Yes, trying not to rush these last few chapters of the story. I've got the outline done, just need to finish my other two chapters first then continue onwards.
Especially as I have a few ideas to spin off this and for the future of Aragorn's sandbox. :)
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