I love the way you wrote the emotion of grief in this chapter. It’s heavy but patient and that breaks my heart. I look forward to the next chapter! I’d love to know how the hermits are doing!
I’m so glad you got that impression because that’s exactly what I was going for! and as for next chapter, we get a hermit perspective about how everyone is doing…
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Veilya on Chapter 8 Sun 04 May 2025 07:17AM UTC
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