AHHHHHH THIS WAS SO GOOD IM SCREAMING. I got so excited when I saw the update and this did not disappoint!!!
The way you write Jod is utterly perfect. Him and Kit have such a complex dynamic and you wrote that excellently! Jod being so desperate and hardened in his easiness of violence so that it's the only way Jod can think of protecting Kit....the conversation with her..... ughhh this is too good. This might be one of my favorite chapters!!!
Jod and Kit's relationship is so insanely complex like they actually hurt me physically to write because above it all we just know it's going to end in disaster. The conversation at the end, and Jod warping Kit's view of the galaxy to match his own because it's how he survived and it's the only way he can ensure she survives... it's only going to erupt by the end.
This was probably one of my fav chapters to write because it was so important in cementing that part of their dynamic
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