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  1. flythesail Thu 22 May 2025 01:05AM UTC

    He lowers his head but not his gaze when he passes her in the corridors during their sweeps. The corners of his mouth twitch upward just enough to suggest a smile. // oh no oh no this is everything to me

    She hears him take a deep breath in behind her before she feels the hand that comes to rest lightly on the middle of her back. // this slow build, cautious start of their relationship... I- the way he approaches her so carefully and so patiently and so softly

    “Do you want me to go?”
    She shakes her head. “Please, don’t.” // ohmygjskfkakakalaala

    How sickeningly domestic. Except, of course, that she isn’t sickened by it. // I love the way you write her inner thoughts so much. The conflict but also the gradual shift

    “You rescue rebellious women, you dance,” she says, holding back a laugh. “Is there anything you don’t do?”
    “Sing,” he replies, grinning. “Though I’d try, if it made you smile like you’re smiling now.” // I CAN HEAR THIS SO PERFECTLY SHRIEKING

    “Whatever you need,” he vows, “you can take it. You can take it from me.” // this + that kiss was so perfect

    NOOOOOOO I was literally just thinking to myself earlier, unprompted: hmmm Kleya and Melshi. Because the way he was carrying her and taking care of her and holding her the whole way back??? It's much to think about. Then I remembered he's literally going to DIE in like a DAY! So I was like ohhhh I hate it here. *Begins to move on with my life.*

    Then I'm scrolling tumblr and just so happen to see this.

    Idk if they're going to stick in my brain but for the time being this fic has created a monster. Because he's so sweet and she's so just *not used* to getting to be a person who doesn't live on the edge and for the rebellion.

    Why am I rambling so much lol. Point being: your writing is really gorgeous and you made their relationship so beautiful. I THINK I MAY LOVE THEM?!?!?

    Thanks for sharing!!!

    Last Edited Thu 22 May 2025 01:06AM UTC

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    1. viharker Thu 22 May 2025 01:11AM UTC

      welcome to the kleyshi cult we're making tshirts and kilts

      the thing is, he dies in like a day and who gives a fuck. i do what i want. fuck canon lmao.

      thank you so much for reading! glad you liked it :)

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      1. comicsansgirl Thu 22 May 2025 03:08AM UTC

        I can bring some kool aid and trail mix to the kleyshi cult meetup but my mom says I have to be home by six.

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