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1. AirQuotes2962 on Chapter 9 Sun 25 May 2025 08:03PM UTC

   

   Oohhhhhh....wait. I just reread that scene. That was actually William talking, wasn't it? I assumed it was Elizabeth since it mentioned her right before someone started tearing into Mike but it was probably Willy.

   That makes sense. The way that person was tearing into Mike felt a lot more like how Willy talks. Elizabeth was just the only person it directly mentioned, so I assumed it had to be her.

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2. 1. corduroi on Chapter 9 Sun 25 May 2025 08:23PM UTC

      

      it was William! Now that you bring it up, i see how to lack of dialogue tags make it ambiguous. i added one just now.

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