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  1. Nachomori3 on Chapter 1 Sat 31 May 2025 12:41AM UTC

    OHH THATS FUCKED THATS FUCKED FUELLING UP LIKE HE'S A WATER PUMP. SO HYPED.
    I really love how you did the fight scene in this- throwing everything they have at each other-
    Im staringgg i am biting.
    Edit after ch.2: Amending this to say i was initially torn between V1 Healing Gabriel and Feeding off him and came to the wrong conclusion. I am super super stoked that it did turn out to be a fucked up IV drip situation in the end because that is just SO VISCERAL.

    Last Edited Sat 31 May 2025 12:59AM UTC

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    1. mothwiththeberries on Chapter 1 Sat 31 May 2025 01:15AM UTC

      WAIT im sorry I can't tell are you saying you didn't like him healing him? If so i am sorry 3 but fear not because I assure you he's only healing him so he can get MOAR blood ahahehehegeg😈😈😈😈

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      1. Nachomori3 on Chapter 1 Sat 31 May 2025 01:17AM UTC

        OH nononono I LOVE IT!!! I was just going "OH YOURE HEALING HIM. OH YOURE HELPING HIM BECAUSE YOULL DIE WITHOUT HIM- ah hold on its the Tank right into the artery? FUELLING FROM HIM???" and then it WAS healing and I literally squealed i am 100% a fan my bad

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        1. mothwiththeberries on Chapter 1 Sat 31 May 2025 01:20AM UTC

          AHEHEHE NO UR GOOD DW. my intention with the two POVS was to create dissonance between the two! So when youre reading as gabriel youre like damn. That's fucked up bro just ripped out my artery... and then when youre reading as V1 youre like YEAH GET HIS ASS . Even tho V1 is healing him it still feels so violent because that's all it knows ykyk and its like. Buh. Juicy. Drama.

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