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  1. TiredAvery on Chapter 2 Sun 08 Jun 2025 07:05PM UTC

    Honestly HONESTLY honestly I love reading your stuff!!
    I loved reading all the fics you wrote previously, especcciallyy DEKOHÄRENZ. I find the way you write really pleasant to read and I find it impressive how you manage to characterize each character in such an endearing way!! Even when some characters aren't explored as in depth than others. I love this fic and I especially love Wätcher and how she interacts with Dreizhen (I love a good sentimental and caring character) and her relationship with Stahl is very interesting (I think Stahl should just remove the stick up her ass and they should kiss...ugh. Ugh. Ugh! )
    I also like how Storch Zwei is characterized. I think her being superstitious is very interesting and I think it's somewhat funny how she hates Jäger for this reason. (Storch Zwei has to be one of my favorite fanon characters so when I first saw the notification that you posted a prequel fic to the whole series involving Zwei I was very excited!! I need more Storch Zwei content! Especially when it involves a specific owl... hm...)
    (Just because I like Zwei doesn't mean I condone her actions though! Zwei is a big, cruel meanie to Dreizhen and she deserves it when she rightfully gets told off for her actions!)
    I think Eins' interactions with Zwei are quite interesting and I like their dynamic, even if it is just Eins getting understandably angry at Zwei for one thing or another.
    Also, I love the inclusion of Dezember in this chapter and in the last! I love EULR's and their medical roles!!
    Dreizhen is also very interesting on her own! I can't wait for her to get her eventual revenge on the other Starlings for all they've put her through. Ugh... Hyäne and Polaris... Leave her alone...
    This chapter was very pleasant to read and I'm definitely going to read it through a few more times to pick up on stuff Ive probably missed out on. I can't wait for the next chapter and more Zwei and Wätcher! (And of course, more Jäger/Dreizhen!)

    Also... I wonder who those two STCRs in the shower were... Hmm... (I have a little hunch it has something to do with Eins maybe... Hmm...)

    Also, also! I suppose we now know how Jäger knows what floor detergent tastes like.. Eugh..! ('And be not drunk with wine, wherein is excess, but be filled with the Spirit !' Indeed, Zwei. You cruel bastard!)

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    1. ElectricRain on Chapter 2 Sun 08 Jun 2025 09:01PM UTC

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      Thank you so much for your comment !!

      I do agree that Stahl and Wächter should kiss (well, again, since the last time was a long time ago). I wanted to showcase how different the trajectories of old hag STAR units could be. I love them both.

      As for the Storches in the shower, I'm leaving that up to the reader's imagination ! >:)

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      1. TiredAvery on Chapter 2 Tue 10 Jun 2025 08:06PM UTC

        Yes, yes, yes! Opposites attract. I love how different they are. I LOVE YOUR OCS SM ARGHHH!!!
        Though I do have to ask, were they ever romantically involved with each other?? or was it more of just a... thing that happened once... I NEED TO KNOW THE STAHLWÄTCHER LORE!!

        (Also sorry for the kind of rambly comment from before 😓 I just realized I could've worded things better. ARGHHH I HAVE SO MUCH TO SAY ABOUT HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR FICS!!)

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        1. ElectricRain on Chapter 2 Tue 10 Jun 2025 11:33PM UTC

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          First of all, don't apologize for the rambly comment, I love those ! As for Wächter and Stahl, honestly I envisioned them as the kind of best friends who are joined at the hip, and who hook up a few times even, but who never end up together despite obvious tension because there are critical incompatibilities, egos, circumstances etc. But the readers are free to draw their own conclusions, of course !

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