WHAT. this is your first fic??? i think it's already very well-written skdakdkjd SORRY IDK HOW TO WORD IT, it seems like it's from someone who has written for years, i just love how u write this and the way the story flows. AND YEAH WE'RE ON THAT WORLDBUILDING GRIND, you are doing great!! i think the dual POV is fun to read... but you should just go with whatever you are comfortable with! i'm buzzing with excitement for the next chapters!!
Yes this is my first fic i fear, im glad you couldnt tell LOL. I really appreciate you saying it seems like i've written for longer, i thought it seemed really cringey?? ish. The way a frist fic would sound. Dual POV remains!! Cant seem to part with writing both perspectives
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