Comment on Gusts of Wind

  1. Urloth (CollyWobbleKiwi) on Chapter 3 Sun 05 Feb 2017 09:01AM UTC

    Holy....oh my god this was the most dark and sensual and suspenseful thing I have ever read, y heart was ounding the entire time I was reading and I got nervous and even frightened for Ingwe and then that scene became the most erotic and kinkiest thing from Manwe's undressing to the collaring to the servicing. Lord almighty. Thank you so much I do not know how to live up to this!

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    1. Sleepless_Malice on Chapter 3 Sun 05 Feb 2017 02:33PM UTC

      This chapter .. seriously.. it KILLED ME - for I was writing it and then my brain was: come on, add some finger sucking in there. I wrote that, too, and than it went: come on, a collar. I know you like elves with collars... and why not add Námo too, and i was like: FUCK OFF, it's so long and incomplete still, and you stupid brain keep telling me to add this and that and this .. and when I look next it was over 6k and i was NOOO .. i don't want to edit it, nobody wants to edit that lol.

      and i am so happy that you liked this chapter .. because there were times when i felt i seriously overdid it with Manwë being such an arse (which certainly falls under canon divergence .. because as much as I love him like this, and find him hot like this .. i just have problems imagining him BEING like this) :D

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