moon. i’m crazy. and you have truly done it again. this was such a read and i loved it so much…!!! daeyoung’s pathetic alpha self is soooo pitiful and cute.. our sad little puppy. i’m typically not one for misunderstandings/miscommunication trope but you write it so well that i forgot to be frustrated with them LMFAO. daeyoung is such a good boy and i was so Excited Elated Happy Giddy when yushi called him that like FUCK YESSS. i’m telling you rn i was screaming and squealing my head off the entire fic. yushi listening to daeng whining and calling for him and then appearing at the worst (best) time 🤤🤤 gentle alpha daeng who is so ashamed of his presentation and how it makes him feel… so sad that yushi is presumably avoiding him… oh poor puppy 😭 okay i’m rambling. let me get into some crazy parts i was sooo in love with—
// He wants more. He wants to choke on the smell of ripe bergamot. He wants to show Yushi that he's not like the other alphas out there and that his rejection is senseless. Daeyoung would let him do anything to him, he would let Yushi take the reins and drag him around. He would do anything to please him, to make him feel good, to show him that he can be good for him just in case that's enough to buy his forgiveness. //
you’re really such an obedient dog daeyoung. eager to please and Everything. we love you.
// Daeyoung feels like a prey. Yushi has him pinned to the bed, holding him in such a way so that Daeyoung can't escape him-not that he would think of doing it anyway. It should be an embarrassing position: an alpha immobilized under an omega, while the latter takes his time just smelling him whole and drinking on his scent. Yushi is breathing into the now tempestuous rainforest that emanates from Daeyoung's body, while Daeyoung just lets him. Where have you heard of an alpha who willingly submits under an omega? //
SUB ALPHA DAEYOUNG IS EVERYTHING TO ME YOU GET ME YOU ALWAYS DO AND YOU’RE ALWAYS COOKING GOD YESSSSSSS. DOM OMEGA YUSHI. YUSHI MAKING HIM FEEL LIKE PREY. despite their second genders despite their height differences YUSHI WILL ALWAYS DOM TF OUT OF DAEYOUNG THATS WHAT IM SAYINGGG
// Yushi simply nods, reassuringly and takes one of Daeyoung's hands into his own, bringing it to the crown of his head. Quickly, his long fingers get entangled around the strands of black hair. He doesn't pull, afraid of being too harsh, but it does feel anchoring.
Yushi simply stifles a laugh and whispers to himself. "Such a good boy." //
BOOM SHAKALAKAAA YES GAWD YESSSSSSSS again. so gentle and sweet and tender you are daeyoung. yushi is telling you that you can grip his head and here you are Not even pulling, even when you’re lost in all the pleasure he’s subjecting you to. Really a good boy. seriously.
all in all this was perfect and hit all my tastes THANK YOU FOR CONTRIBUTING TO YD TAG WITH YOUR BEAUTIFUL SPECTACULAR WONDERFUL WRITING 🩵💚🩵💚🩵 WE LOVE YOU
MY SWEET LILY 💗🌸 i already told you how thankful i am for your comment and your constant support and your loving words ahhhhh i didn't lie when i said that your comment made me reallyreallyreally happy, like huge grin and everything. thank u so much for taking the time to write such a long comment ahhhhhhh ily <3
i loooove when daeng's a little pathetic and a little bit of a pitiful puppy, i think it just makes him so endearing. i do think he's very alpha-like but he's also sooo puppy-coded, so ofc i had to make him a bit of a very endearing pathetic alpha. and YES he's quite a good boy, thanks for noticing. idk i just love that he's just so eager to do his best while being aware of which lines he doesn't want to cross so i HAD TO exploit that trait of his.. 🚬
tbh i'm a sucker for the miscommunication/misunderstanding trope and i think the only reason why it's not frustrating is bc we know the same amount of info as daeyoung so we have no clue of what is going on through yushi's head, so we're just left to believe daeyoung's assumptions until they're proven wrong, and side with his confusion and sadness bc we have no way of knowing whether he's reasons are real or not.. btw thank you so much for pointing out that daeyoung was ashamed of his presentation bc i really tried to use shame and guilt as the main points to navigate his feelings ahhh
THE PART YOU CHOSE OF DAENG BEING SUBBY WHILE YUSHI SMELLS HIM IS MY FAVORITE ONE AHHHHHHHHH like, in the entire fic, probably my favorite one to write. SO I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT AHHHHHHHHH for the record i do NOT think ushi is some sort of sadistic daddy dom so i really hope it doesn't look like that ☝️ in fact i think i should have made him more pathetic and clumsy too, BUT i think he has EVERY right to do wtv he likes to daeyoung <3
omg this reply is so messy i was really trying to pick parts of your comment and just dissect them idk BDVZJDBDBD BUT IM SO GLAD YOU LIKED ITTTTTT 💗💗💗 mwah! thank u again heheheheheh yay
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