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  1. FathomMeOut on Chapter 1 Sat 12 Jul 2025 11:02AM UTC

    4-picture collage showing a sunny forest glade, a deer lying down in flowery grass, a rabbit smelling a flower, and Merlin looking at them with wonder

    That's a great approach. Dedicated. There's no doubt it's paying off better than just a beat sheet would! - Also, you kind of make me want to read the two stories together too, so I can compare line by line instead of going off memory as I'm reading, as I'm mostly doing. On a future reread, I'll definitely give that a try so I don't miss out on any of the details you've worked on :]

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    1. TheDreamPriestess on Chapter 1 Sun 13 Jul 2025 11:55AM UTC

      Thank you so much! I would absolutely recommend reading them side by side (and not just because of all the tiny details I put in there!!!) <3 <3 <333

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