I like the start, I think waking up in the tree and then slowly realizing it was a great move, as well as the observation of the creepers that are below said tree. This creates a natural tension to the scene which works out rather well.
The logical process that Alex has is a very good, normal thing for an explorer to do, and on point too. I think that the recording of everything for record again is a cool idea that I really love about this story.
The confusion on the outcome of the creepers was another very strong part of the chapter, which stood out in a lot of positive ways. I also think the tension in this whole chapter is very good, I think this is a great build on chapter form the last two and was really fun to read.
If I was in Alex’s place, I would be screaming and scrambling to survive. Alex is an explorer though. She has faced challenges like this before, but never has her circumstances been quite this dire. Given her experience, she would keep as cool of a head as possible and record any finding she comes across in the hopes that someone out there can hear her, and, if they can’t, that it will help anyone who comes across her distress device.
Thank you for continuing to read. As you are now caught up, is there anything you would like to see in the future?
Well, I am good with whatever direction really, I think the exploration element is great, I think Alex's voice is also very amazingly told, and the first person pov adds a lot. Whenever you post chapter 4, I definitely will read it.
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