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  1. What agony reading this chapter It would be so simple if they sat down and talked, it would solve all the problems Oh, how hateful!
    It makes me a little angry at Craig for not speaking up and leaving Tweek living in this paranoia, I understand the character and what he's going through, but it makes me angry.
    I hope Craig can improve his communication and be more open, and also not hurt Tweek anymore. I know it's not intentional, but it's not fair either.
    Also, where are the characters like Cartman and Butters? They won't appear in the story?

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    1. Thank you for the comment!

      This is a multi-part series - and yes, Craig's communication skills will get better... Eventually. After he hits rock bottom. Believe me when I say - part two is... Bad. :)

      Butters makes his first appearance in chapter 8 - he will be a prominent figure in the future, and eventually be in a happy and healthy relationship by part three.

      Cartman will also appear too and be a disrupter to some background plots, causing more tension and chaos for some other characters.

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      1. I'm very excited for the next chapters, this
        W I'm really enjoying your story and how it's evolving, I'm frustrated with Craig for not opening up but I can completely understand why he does that.
        I'm creating some theories about the next chapters and my god I'm so excited to read the ending

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        1. I can't wait to hear your thoughts for the future chapters! Speaking of which - it should be posted in the next day or so. I'm still fighting with a couple spots.

          I'm hoping this next chapter will feel like a soothing balm. :)

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