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  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2012 04:06PM UTC

    WOW! Just wow! I loved every single word of it! I am confused by Allison's feelings for Jackson though, but I'm sure you will explain them in the next part? Again, I loved it!

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    1. Boy_On_Strings on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2012 04:22PM UTC

      This was one of those things that was sort of subtle. In the beginning when Danny is talking to Stiles it talks about the drink messing with the werewolves and humans. In the story, each werewolf subconsciously pushes down their mindset/demeanor onto the closest human to them that they shared the drink with.

      That's why Stiles was so forceful with Derek, because he was acting like Derek.
      That's why Danny was getting jealous of Scott paying attention to Jackson, because he was acting like Jackson, subconsciously compelled to like Scott because Jackson does.
      That's why Allison was thinking about Jackson, because Scott was thinking about Jackson.

      The mystery that is referenced in the final chapter is why wasn't Lydia affected? Theoretically Jackson's desire for Scott should have rolled down onto her instead of Danny, but no one is quite sure why that didn't happen in the story.

      Hope that clears it up, I tried to be subtle with it, but maybe it was a little too subtle, heh.

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      1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2012 07:38PM UTC

        Huh... I had an idea that somehow Lydia's feelings towards Jackson were transferred to her but that clears it up yes. Exited for the final chapter! :)

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        1. Boy_On_Strings on Chapter 1 Sat 16 Jun 2012 01:21AM UTC

          Oh crap, the final chapter? Did I spoil something when I gave that explanation? I'd assumed you'd read the full story when I responded.

          If by final chapter you mean the final part of the series, then there's at least two more stories after the ones currently posted. After this it goes to Love is a Four Letter Word for Awesome, then Word's Aren't Always Enough (which is almost done), and then theoretically Under a Blanket of Snow (which is also theoretically the end of the series as far as I have planned).

          Once season two is done, in the break that follows I may end up doing a longer series like this one, but we'll see. Lots of crazy stuff going on at the moment.

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          1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Sat 16 Jun 2012 06:49AM UTC

            No no, you didn't spoil, I think? I've read the whole story and also "Love is a Four Letter Word for Awesome" and I guess me talking about the final chapter was me assuming you would only write one chapter after Brewing Mischief and I am so happy I was wrong about that.

            But now you have me kinda confused about that "spoil" thing!? :D

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            1. Boy_On_Strings on Chapter 1 Sat 16 Jun 2012 12:53PM UTC

              If you read all of Brewing Mischief than I didn't spoil anything. I was thinking that if you hadn't read all of it, but I explained Allison, Danny, and Stiles's reactions in the story that it could have given stuff away for the later chapters.

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