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1. AshEshyr on Chapter 3 Sun 17 Aug 2025 11:04PM UTC

   

   I think you did a good job with the content in this chapter, though the grammar was a bit spotty and it made some sentences hard to read.

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2. 1. CayBD on Chapter 3 Sun 17 Aug 2025 11:12PM UTC

      

      Thank you, apologies about the grammar, I'll try to do better. I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment as well your honesty

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