Comment on the origin of bad end friends: bill and dipper

  1. mego96 on Chapter 1 Fri 22 Aug 2025 01:06PM UTC

    Gonna be honest, I started off this chapter scraping my mind trying to remember if I’d forgotten part of the episode or something XD

    This story is excellent so far, though I do have a suggestion. Have you considered using italics for Dipper’s ghost dialogue? I think either that or underlines would better convey the difference between the two in things like:

    /quit it off/ I stopped. Ok, that’s it! This was the last straw of my patience! /GIVE ME BACK MY BODY!/ and like a cat attacking to fight another cat.

    or alternatively

    —quit it off— I stopped. Ok, that’s it! This was the last straw of my patience! —GIVE ME BACK MY BODY!— and like a cat attacking to fight another cat.

    though strike through could also be an option

    —quit it off— I stopped. Ok, that’s it! This was the last straw of my patience! —GIVE ME BACK MY BODY!— and like a cat attacking to fight another cat.

    I just feel like the way it currently is is somewhat hard to follow ^^;

    Oh, and in case you don’t know the html for it:

    < I > italics < / i >

    < u > Underline < / u >

    < s > Strikethrough < / s >

    < b > Bold < / b >

    Last Edited Fri 22 Aug 2025 01:21PM UTC

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    1. the_writer_tiger on Chapter 1 Tue 02 Sep 2025 10:01AM UTC

      Wow, that's a great idea! Thanks, I'm going to have in mind when I write dialogue about Mindscape Dipper

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