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  1. Moldy_Lemon on Chapter 3 Sat 23 Aug 2025 08:53PM UTC

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    Adrian Graye seems to be a little... less annoying than in canon. I like that he got to do something plot wise.
    "Adrian could only see through that kid’s illusions with significant tricks on his side. These illusions were anything but shoddy. Although he would like to give them some deserved recognition, looking good in front of the Emperor had higher priority."
    I like that Adrian knows that Gus is a LOT of better than him in illusions! He just won't admit it hehe. He still a huge self loving snob (as I saw in chapter 2), so that's a relief.

    "Luz dared to take another look, “Please don’t notice I’m gone, please don’t notice I’m... Entering the crypt?” The girl let out a confused sound as she didn’t quite understand what was going on here."
    I enjoyed this bit very much.

    I love how the Pov changes. Plus, I looked at the tags... "Luz Noceda is the Empress of Boiling Isles" shocked me. I wonder if Belos will force Luz to be the empress (and for it to work he would need to vanish her from everyone's memories, so no one knows she's a human) or Luz becomes the Empress after defeating Belos. Chapter 1 seemed to be told from Amity's POV if I am correct, so perhaps we will see more from her later. Like chapter 2 and 3 is how this all started, and the rest will be Amity trying to get Luz back? Either way I can't wait to see what happens!

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    1. MexicanPeanut173 on Chapter 3 Thu 25 Sep 2025 10:58PM UTC

      Sorry AO3 hid this from me. I would have definitely replied earlier if I had seen it.

      We will have to see how Luz will become the Empress of the Boiling Isles. (Tip: The Fanfiction summary gives some hints) I am glad you like the POV changes because it is a writing style I have enjoyed in other works I read and tried to adapt into my own writing once I started. We will most likely see more of Amity later. At the moment, however, she is stuck in her bed with a broken foot. (Sadly) She won't be receiving the "gift" in the Oracle coven's crypt this way.

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