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  1. kerfufflekool on Chapter 3 Sat 23 Aug 2025 10:50PM UTC

    I just about squealed when I saw this had a new chapter! As always I loved the new chapter, the conjuring is really cool even though most of the science behind it went over my head😅. Fleur is here! A year early! And it seems her Veela charm is working on poor Mary, interesting because most interpretations of Veela charm is that it doesn’t work on people who aren’t attracted to the Veela’s gender(in this case straight girls or gay guys). Also, SIRIUS!!!!!!!!!!

    As usual excellent chapter keep up the good work🤩🤩

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    1. bioticMecha on Chapter 3 Sat 23 Aug 2025 11:24PM UTC

      (⁠*⁠´⁠ω⁠｀⁠*⁠) tyyy

      yeah the transfiguration is what have me the hardest time when i was building the magic system but I'm really happy with how it turned out, even if it Is a bitch to wrap ur head around

      also vily (plural of vila) don't have an allure in this! Fleur is just really really pretty :)c
      i will eventually share more about what all is going on with vily, but for now it's a secret ;)

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      1. kerfufflekool on Chapter 3 Sat 23 Aug 2025 11:26PM UTC

        Oh interesting, with how many changes this story makes I forgot about the Veela being different, I guess Fluer just like that😂

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