Funny you mention wishing there was more of the father/daughter filth, the initial idea for the story was only Cassie and her stepbrothers, but as more and more excuses needed to be made to allow such a dynamic to be at least semi-believable, I eventually realized halfway through writing its first draft that I needed a way to explain what Cassie's stepdad's role was in the ultra-coordinated systematic abuse against her, and as I fleshed out that excuse of what he was doing and why, I decided to throw in a Cassie/her stepdad scene rather half-assedly. When the first draft was done, I read it back and realized there was more potential to pander to people with the classic daddy kink and expanded on that scene of Cassie and her stepdad more, adding lots more detail instead of just a passive 'oh yeah and her stepdad knew the whole time and beat off to it and whatever' that it originally was thrown in as.
During the final quality assurance pass, I added to the scene even more just to give it a bit extra oomph and make it feel like it properly stood out on its own as an independent smut scene so that there wouldn't be any remnants left over of the 'yeah whatever he's a creep too' angle that Cassie and her stepfather initially was written in to be.
I'm happy my work was able to suck you in deeper than you were initially willing to go upon clicking, that makes me feel like I didn't waste my time putting what I feel was way too much effort into this utter filth, lol.
There's definitely massive potential for a pet-play fetish with anthro stuff. I've seen people lean into that before, usually with a dom-male-canine X sub-female-feline dynamic. A few works from Mal the Pilot Cat come to mind, such as "A Heroine's Fall" that I think is currently only found on FurAffinity atm (used to also be on SoFurry but SoFurry is moving websites and may be down for months).
The story I linked in the chapter 1 author's notes titled Party Favor has some direct and punctuated pet play in it, though it is a bit brief and really there more as a passive thing than an extended scene that pounces on the full potential of the fetish. I enjoy power play a lot too, but have never really given too much thought to a pet-play angle to it.
Her stepbrothers were kinda written as interchangeable, muscled studs, and only as I kept writing did I feel the need to distinguish them a bit more, such as their habits and preferences in shower time with Cassie. They were all primarily written to be a sort of hivemind of 'big bad boy bullies', thus the distinct lack of realism with how none of them ever fought over Cassie. I suppose it could be loosely implied that their father brought them up as detail-oriented, cooperative scumbags that are results first and personal interests second, as per how he made his riches being quite the same. All the insinuations that her stepbrothers had a crush on Cassie and wanted to be her boyfriends were indeed just another means to bully her, but from how I wanted to detail a few of them getting full control over Cassie, I did deliberately want there to be soft implications that some of them actually liked her beyond the fact she is a pretty teenage plaything, just that that interest they had in her never trumped the 'hivemind bullies' approach that always spearheaded the bulk of the smut scenes. So, no matter how much they enjoyed treating Cassie as a personal girlfriend object, what always took precedence for them was a sort of 'bros before hoes' mentality, if you will. Lol.
Fun fact about a sort of deleted scene, the part where Bate is said to have frenched Cassie while her webcam was on was originally going to be a fully fledged scene as long as the others, and would progress into Bate angling the camera down and outright molesting Cassie on camera while her friends (one of which was an implied teenage love interest) in a group call started calling her a skank for doing weird shit with her own family, then leaving the call until only the male gamer friend remained watching. Then Bate would kick it up a notch and outright rape Cassie while her crush was the only viewer in a very NTR fashion. It was originally intended to be a humiliation ritual fetish that dipped into cucky stuff, however I decided not to write it and instead keep it a passive mention of a sexually charged mouth kiss while a webcam was on because I felt the story implications conflicted too heavily with how Cassie's stepbrothers went to deliberate, calculated lengths to keep their abuse of their stepsister a secret, and broadcasting said abuse to random well-knowns of your abuse target just made it too difficult to present the scene believably in the setting, even if it had lots of spicy potential to be some good utter filth.
I still hold the appeal of the idea in my head though. There are some story premises I still have jotted down and saved that would capitalize on this very strongly. One of which is just a plain-and-simple outright 'bad guys abduct good guy's girlfriend and rigorously ravish her while sending him texted video-clips of it'. Not sure if I'll get around to writing such a thing, as it's a bit one-trick-pony-esque, but maybe that'd be fine if I were to just make it a much shorter story than this one was.
I agree, hot thought indeed but for me it's mid-to-upper-key, lol.
Cassie's mother has basically no established character, and that was on purpose. If I ever had to give her character, I would likely write her to be appalled at the revelation of what was being done to her daughter behind her back and just have her reaction be to take Cassie and literally flee the state, heavily implying that mister evil croc-dad had tremendous money and influence and would destroy their lives in lengthy court battles over custody and accusations or other scummy 'rich bad guy' tactics, thus the mother opted for the quick, immediate escape to try and protect her daughter, but then the story would get far too dramatic and real, and I don't particularly enjoy writing realistic drama (unless it directly helps amplify upcoming smut).
I do actually have a follow-up premise planned in my head, and had it planned since well before this story was completed, though I am unsure if I'll ever actually write it.
Its premise is 'prom night', and Cassie is enjoying prom with a couple gal friends, but no actual prom date (her stepbrothers would never allow it). She gets a text from one of her stepbrothers mid-prom that summons her to the school parking lot where a limo is waiting, and she is pulled inside by them and is abused in various ways with her prom dress remaining on the entire time.
One of her friends noticed she was acting off before leaving the building and goes to investigate, then sneaks up on the limo and recognizes what's going on inside. Her concern for Cassie quickly shifts into degenerate arousal and she starts 'enjoying' herself outside the car door as she listens and occasionally pops her head up for a quick visual, stealthy visual, spotting only Cassie's legs held up and out with a hulking crocodile thug between them.
It ultimately concludes in the stepbrothers having their full way with Cassie, then letting her go back inside and continue prom, but shortly after she leaves, Cassie's friend has no available escape, and is then caught by the stepbrothers who realize she was eavesdropping on their attack of Cassie, so they pull her into the limo and give her much the same treatment, but because she's a fucking freak, she pretends to be scared but is entirely too into it, and is actually jealous of Cassie in secret, which an internal monologue would heavily imply or outright state as the story ended with her own """attack""" beginning to ramp up in the same limo while Cassie was already back inside.
Basically the follow-up would just be a big fat excuse to lean heavily into the fetish-y concept of pretty girls in beautiful prom dresses being outnumbered and defiled by burly bad boys on what was supposed to be a special night, but using the existing characters from this story plus one maybe two new ones.
I don't think I could ever do a follow-up of Cassie moving to college and having her stepbrothers follow without running constant risk of the whole story just feeling the same as the first one and not offering enough new things to justify itself being a follow-up.
Fun facts about characters would maybe be, uhhh... the number I landed on for how many stepbrothers Cassie had was actually decided specifically by how I envisioned the final scene. One at each breast, one at each leg, one at her head, one at her crotch, and a final one filming it, which ended up being 7. Their names were just basically pulled out of my butt. Never heard of anyone in fiction nor reality named Zeedin, but the others have somewhat distinct inspirations that I put through a quick, simple, 'anthropomorphic character' filter in my brain to make them sound more unique. For example, Javel was named after a javelin, Dean was in my head because I was watching Iron Giant at some point during the start of this story being written, so I just stole that name because it felt unique and "dude-bro"-y enough. Bate originated from 'bait' as in fishing bait, because I had my mind on where these characters would come from as crocodile anthros, and a culture/climate highly involved with fishing sounded fitting enough. Arlos is just Carlos without the C. Mallick I recall was literally me just taking the name "Michael" and messing it up until it sounded more distinct but still like a name. Lastly, Trekan just came from the word "trek".
As for Cassie... ummm, well her middle name being Tanna was decided on the fly specifically because of how I wanted to conclude the smut scene with her and her stepdad. She had no middle name before that scene got its second QA pass during initial writing.
Thanks so much for enjoying my work and telling me what resonated with you. I am enjoying the larger audience of readers on here than inkbunny or sofurry had to offer. I do have another story half-written that is still in the works, and surely I will get around to finishing it, so there is other works I'll try to eventually upload when I'm finally done and happy enough with them to show to others.
Never feel like you put too much effort into utter filth, because said utter filth has absolutely had me feigning for the past 24 hours. This fic was so good that it got me writing a fat ass comment and wondering more about the world.
If you were to continue this it’d be like Hermes giving moly to Odysseus so he could fight Circe. Like ahh, I want so badly to know more of the brothers and fathers and the household dynamics pre-gang rape and after gangrape, also premarriage.
This is a came for the porn stayed for the plot moment for me, you wrote such interesting characters it made me like connect with them and want to take them on a date so I could see what type of person they are. Me when i get invested in a story with barely any plot and mostly sex 😔
Yeah, you caught me, I gave only as much thought to the depth of the characters as was necessary to get them fuckin', lol.
I suppose feel free to develop a headcanon you enjoy, you clearly sound more qualified than me to flesh them out as characters beyond the required excuses for smut scenes.
Closest thing to knowing more about them would be their separate shower times with Cassie. I do recall that part of the story being where I deliberately put the most thought into distinguishing them from each other and giving them real personalities that were put on display through actions. I guess that could be the lynchpin one could use to gleam the most into them as individuals :)
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