Maybe it's just me, but I like it better when characters's lines are separated by paragraphs. Having the lines of multiple characters in the same paragraph seems awkward to me. Other than that, really good. Usually not a fan of darker pokemon fics, but decided to give this a go. Hope it's not AS dark as I heard the The Soul Stone is.
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SerpentX on Chapter 2 Thu 28 Aug 2025 03:25PM UTC
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