You really captured Seto's inner turmoil good. The way his anger, guilt, and protective instincts for Mokuba all clash together felt raw and powerful, terrifying and heartbreaking all at once.
The image of Seto frozen mid-movement, Pegasus' blood on his hands nails the sense of Seto standing at the edge of becoming what he hates.
I loved how Pegasus was written too, so smug and manipulative, just pushing every one of Seto's buttons. And then Yugi's (well, Yami's 👀) entrance such a perfect moment of contrast with the grounding AND the tension was chef's kiss, and that detail with Seto reaching for Yugi's wrist YES JUICY!!!
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