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  1. SassyArtichoke Sun 07 Sep 2025 05:30PM UTC

    SKDHasdashd you POET. This is so touching and beautiful and painful

    your galaxy gave birth
    to a little sun
    destined to shine.

    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND PAINFUL because you just know how it ends 😭

    and you're too weak
    to die in peace,
    aren't you?

    You,
    The Invader.

    Ugly crying, chills...this is so tragic, it hurts so much, thank you thank you 🥹❤️

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    1. ArdenSkyeHolmes221 Sun 07 Sep 2025 09:25PM UTC

      aaaaaaaaah 🥹🥹 you always know how to make a girl blush ☺️ thank youuuuu 💜

      let me tell you - when I wrote “destined to shine” I gagged myself! Almost did the whole… well, I guess I can’t write anything better than that lol I just really liked the simplicity of it because it’s beautiful and painful like you said!

      If I ever decide to flesh this one out past a drabble, I want more before that “and you’re too weak | to die in peace, | aren’t you?” bit. I HAD started writing more until I realized the drabble prompt wasn’t snippet length but 100 words lol

      I can always count on you for the kindest comments in the galaxy! Thank you friend 💜

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