Okay, this is actually SO GOOD. The dialogue between Xavier and Moira in their scenes stands out as a particular high point for me; it just flows so naturally. The opening monologue from Xavier is fantastic. More than that, as someone who has been in very small high school/college groups due to study abroad, various class trips and just generally having a very small high school, you've managed incredibly well to create the exact kind of tension and development of friendships that happens at a breakneck pace when you're seeing the same 4 or so people every moment of every day. Adding telepathy and the hiding of various mutant powers doesn't do much to help that, for sure. The teaser with Erik is great; somehow I didn't expect him to show up so quickly. Very excited to keep reading.
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Fortanono on Chapter 2 Sat 13 Sep 2025 03:45AM UTC
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