>"Your brother Fin is fourteen. He doesn't have a grimoire, maybe won't get one because he's never been able to speak or hear. He doesn't do magic because he's a bit simple. You brought him to the city with you when you did the Knights’ exam, and he stayed with a friend. But that friend threw him out, maybe roughed him around to explain those bruises. You're both stuck here saving to get back to Ryka or whatever backwater it is you’re from."< - Good story, but can you really pass off Finral as a 14 year old? If so, what else did the assholes do to stunt his growth?!?
>Who was Langris? Fin had been trying to convince his father that Langris had not done something. It took longer for Magna to fall back to sleep trying to decode the mystery of this other person. It was the only name he could link to Fin. Magna couldn't be sure that the boy asleep next to him was even called Fin.
Maybe he should try to find out who Langris was.< - YES, detective Magna at work!
But regarding the matter of Finral's inability to speak, I have a question. We later find out WHY he is in this state, but why can he talk when he is sleeping. Does the THING only work if he's conscious?
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KitsuneNee_chan on Chapter 4 Sat 13 Sep 2025 07:27AM UTC
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