Comment on every heart a kingdom

  1. IamSJ on Chapter 1 Sun 14 Sep 2025 08:52AM UTC

    i like this take on them! lbh feels that automatic reverence that comes with being prioritized and saved, but he still reads as defensive and scared and untrusting. it’s a very compelling depiction of white lotus binghe at the end of his abuse arc! i can’t wait to see where u take him!

    sy-as-gyx and lbh seem like they don’t quite know what to do with each other. they are focused on being productive but lowkey awkward about each other lol!! the dynamic is a great starting point. i can see them clashing at first and eventually earning each others trust and admiration as they get to know each other

    i like the emphasis on lbh feeling underprepared for combat. he doesn’t have the martial arts know-how and has been thrown into the deep end! I sense a teacher arc coming up for out sy!gyx lol

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