Reading this again, I can't help but be impressed by how you've shown Rumi's emotional growth, how just deciding to trust Mira and Zoey has already done wonders for her.
More, just being aware that her patterns grow when she is ashamed or hating herself, and get better when she loves and accepts herself and that Celine's attitude and behavior was making them worse has improved her mental health and emotional stability enormously. And that listening to and believing the girls opinion about her makes them better has got to help.
Thanks so much! The whole reason for this fic was really just that I couldn't get the idea that if Rumi had just been a little more self aware about her patterns she would've been so much better off. Even if she can't quite trust herself she trusts Mira and Zoey.
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Kaimodi on Chapter 1 Sat 20 Sep 2025 11:45AM UTC
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