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  1. GreenTeaFox0607 on Chapter 1 Mon 22 Sep 2025 10:20PM UTC

    My God, is it a holiday today? I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story, which promises to be dynamic. I hope you've had a good rest before starting work, as writing frequently can be challenging and lead to depression.
    Johanna Swann, my girl, I feel so sorry for her. She's accomplished a lot in Lys, but she's gone through a lot, and no one has tried to save her.
    Borros Baratheon's pride is broken and will never be fixed 😂. At least he thinks about his people, unlike Viserys.
    Will Alyssa and Marcus have a child? I mean, an adopted one. This couple will only have a biological child if Marcus learns to give birth himself

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    1. TheDauntless (GoddessOfWriting) on Chapter 1 Tue 23 Sep 2025 01:26AM UTC

      thank you for the concern, friend! I've just finished a final exam and that is usually the cause for my depression lol, but I promise I will take care of myself.

      Johanna gets rescued this time, because we are not going to sit around and ignore the problem like Viserys.

      Boremund is the one in charge at the moment, so he is very logical and pragmatic. We will be meeting Borros in the Stepstones though - and give him a good thrashing while we are at it.

      I have toyed with the idea of Marcus and Alyssa having a child (usually along the lines of an oopsie-baby that they decided to keep), but I'm still not sure about including it in the story. So far, I just have a vague idea of the Targ-Maegyr toddler climbing the Cannibal like a jungle gym and the Cannibal staying still because it's THEIR hatchling. We are not eating that one.
      The idea of Marcus carrying the child so Alyssa doesn't have to give birth made me laugh though

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      1. Fai_Gensou on Chapter 1 Thu 25 Sep 2025 04:11PM UTC

        An oopsie baby makes sense. Or a ‘didn’t know she was pregnant’ baby

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        1. TheDauntless (GoddessOfWriting) on Chapter 1 Thu 25 Sep 2025 05:53PM UTC

          I had a draft idea of the Cannibal being the one to be like “HATCHLING! THERE IS A HATCHLING!!” and Alyssa being confused because there were no eggs around.

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          1. Capwidow (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sun 05 Oct 2025 02:14AM UTC

            Love the idea of Alyssa and Marcus having an oops baby and keeping it and the Cannibal being the first to realize she is pregnant. Also, hope we get a chapter of them having some kind of wedding celebration bc they are essentially a common law marriage at this point lol

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